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Larry C
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Personal Preference
By Larry Chadwick


I preferred you in living color,
But I’ll settle for black and white.
It’s just that having you gone,
Doesn’t yet seem quite right.

I preferred you as my royalty,
The father who was my prince.
But I’ll settle for what I have,
And be grateful for my prints.

I preferred you at remote risk,
Of ever really being framed.
But I’ll settle for how it is,
On the mantle in my picture frame.

I prefer that life go on day by day,
Even when having you is what I prefer.
But I’ll settle for what I have,
All these memories of who you were.


October 12, 2002

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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I prefer to call this a

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2 posted 2002-10-12 09:03 AM


Thank goodness for the memories, Larry.
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(big hugggssssss) Oh Larry, this is so wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, and I think you have said it so well and sincerely! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, always hang onto those precious memories, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma
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4 posted 2002-10-12 04:40 PM


precious memories indeed....thank you for sharing

Charisma

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5 posted 2002-10-12 09:24 PM


Heartfelt, wise and tenderly spoken, Larry.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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6 posted 2002-10-12 09:58 PM


Your father lives on in your memories of him.
He is loving you from above as you are him from below.

You write from a well that is rich and full of love and joy, pain and sorrow...all the experiences and memories swirl around in your heart and soul. When you draw from this well, you create heart warming  poems such as this.

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-12 10:01 PM


Larry - as you know memories are treasures. Treasures of before and of thoughts...

BC

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8 posted 2002-10-13 12:45 PM


Karilea,
You caught me off guard there. Sweet. Thanks I like that.

Sue,
Sorrow would be unbearable without them. Thanks.

Noah,
Thank you for your understanding. Peace dear friend.

Charisma,
Well dear friend, thank you for that. It is so nice to have you back.

Michael,
The benefits of age and experience but mostly luck. Thanks man.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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9 posted 2002-10-13 12:46 PM


Linda,
Your thoughts provide so much comfort and strength. Thank you for such heartfelt friendship. Always.

Bill,
Yes indeed. It seems you understand too well...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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10 posted 2002-10-14 08:33 PM


Nicely said Larry...James
Larry C
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11 posted 2002-10-15 12:18 PM


James,
As always, thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2002-10-15 08:12 PM


Larry, thanks so much for sharing this piece of your heart and memories. You are a very sensitive, loving, and caring man. I'm sure that your Dad was proud of you. Thanks for sharing your work, too. I thouroughly enjoy all of it I've read.
With Love To All,
Ethel

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13 posted 2002-10-15 08:57 PM


Larry... Your emptiness is so very present in this heartfelt poem but I believe you are hopefully coming too terms with your loss and accepting that which you still have.
Take Care Paul

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14 posted 2002-10-15 10:44 PM


A beautiful and loving tribute to your father, Larry...
Your love for him shines through every word
~ teary hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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15 posted 2002-10-15 10:53 PM


Touching ode to acceptance.
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16 posted 2002-10-15 11:01 PM


I'm so glad you have so many happy memories of your Dad to keep by your side every day until you can be with him again in Heaven.

                          Dawn

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17 posted 2002-10-16 12:33 PM


Ethel,
And he told me so often. Thank you. You are very tender hearted yourself. I appreciate you so much.

Paul,
This poem was an effort to express my loss mingled with my desire for life to go on. And to reflect that while he is gone I have my memories to keep him in my heart. Thanks Paul.

Lyra,
Thank you so much. You are a good friend.

RS,
Oh good. I had hoped it was exactly that. Thanks.

Dawn,
Thank you for that. I can hardly wait.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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