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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-10-12 12:50 PM

The Trap!

Riding the wave

     of accomplishment,

mists of excellence

     sparkle omnipotence,

ah, you are the sun!
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..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-13-2002 03:23 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-12 08:47 AM

No, I'm Sun...you be regards...LOL...a lot can be said in a few words...I like the way you write!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-12 09:57 AM

...with a little bit of shine...

thanks for your reply sunshine, I appreciate your comments, and your
sense of humor.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

3 posted 2002-10-13 12:25 PM

Well then, shine on !

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-10-13 02:44 AM

Are you a Leo? Sounds like it! As they say, it takes one to know one! haha

EA

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-10-13 03:30 AM

I revised this from "I" to "you".
Nice to see your sense of humor.
I originally was going to use
~the wind~ but, can you imagine
if  Toerag got hold of it.....

Big Smiles to all of you who
replied...Maybe it has an apt
title.

  ...may we all shine on....
        God Bless

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-10-18 04:30 AM

regards~
I'm liking this piece very much.
You've said much in just a few words.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-10-18 05:04 AM

Vicky, Thanks for the post.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2002-10-18 08:00 AM

Of mice from men...It's a trap...I hear the snap..it's to late...should not hesitate..pass the cheese...please...snap..

Good write gal

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-10-18 08:15 AM

regards,
I could see what Toe might say if you'd used wind and he still may if you make the opportunity. I enjoyed the shine of sun.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

10 posted 2002-10-18 08:31 AM

Kethry, I enjoyed the shine, too. She is so bright, isn't she?

And no way am I giving Toe an opportunity such as that. Look what
he's done with the title alone.
He needs no help from me. Actually, I adore hit wit!

Warmly, Pat

I only wrote this poem for too often I fall into the state of arrogance, when all of life is going exceedingly well...I can lose humility and a sense of God faster than Toe can write a funny poem..

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-29 12:38 PM

Pat, this is a very well written poem. I love the way you wrote it in just a few words.
Thank you for sharing, Pat.

Oh, I'm just gonna leave that about Mr. Toe alone. HaHa!!

With Love,
Ethel

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