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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-10-11 08:20 PM

“MINE IN STEALTH”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
In soft voice you whisper
your words with
pen while I dream…

Passions fill my soul with its
softness , as it flows
with tender heartbeats...

Candles flicker in the warm breeze
of a southern night, dancing
to and fro with your breath…

Your senses, thoughts, desires,
reach mine in stealth, yet
their touch is real upon me…

You of tenderness, whose musing
is your love from deepness within…
It flows onto this parchment blending
with one thought, my wanting you…
~~~~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-10-11 08:35 PM

This is so beautiful, Bill!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-10-11 08:39 PM

Enjoyed...flowing with tenderness...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-11 09:12 PM

Beautiful and very romantic Bill...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-11 09:53 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may this candlelight always lick your heart and fill you with loves eternal afterglow! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-10-11 09:55 PM

Bill...this is one of the most romantic and beautiful poems I have ever read. Your imagery is just outstanding and your words speak to my heart like a whisper of breath upon poetic wings. ***Ivy Rose

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-10-11 10:09 PM

As always, such romantic words coming from your heart.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-10-11 11:02 PM

You've described perfectly the coming of love in silence. I really like this, Bill.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2002-10-12 12:13 PM

This is especially nice! Enjoyed.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-10-12 12:28 PM

This is so lovely Bill. A wonderfully soft read.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

10 posted 2002-10-12 12:45 PM

Bill,

Very nice, I'm ready now for sweet dreams.

SG

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-10-12 01:17 PM

Nicely done BC....I see a change in your
style, and I like it...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-10-12 01:21 PM

Bill - I honestly believe that this is the best poem that I have read by you. Very, very nice, and soooo romantic!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-05-03 04:14 AM

very seductive

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