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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


0 posted 10-11-2002 08:20 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bill Charles

“MINE IN STEALTH”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
In soft voice you whisper
your words with
pen while I dream…

Passions fill my soul with its
softness , as it flows
with tender heartbeats...

Candles flicker in the warm breeze
of a southern night, dancing
to and fro with your breath…

Your senses, thoughts, desires,
reach mine in stealth, yet
their touch is real upon me…

You of tenderness, whose musing
is your love from deepness within…
It flows onto this parchment blending
with one thought, my wanting you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 10-11-2002 08:35 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

This is so beautiful, Bill!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 10-11-2002 08:39 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...flowing with tenderness...James
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3 posted 10-11-2002 09:12 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful and very romantic Bill...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 10-11-2002 09:53 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may this candlelight always lick your heart and fill you with loves eternal afterglow! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 10-11-2002 09:55 PM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ivy Rose

Bill...this is one of the most romantic and beautiful poems I have ever read. Your imagery is just outstanding and your words speak to my heart like a whisper of breath upon poetic wings.  ***Ivy Rose
NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 10-11-2002 10:09 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

As always, such romantic words coming from your heart.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Duncan
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7 posted 10-11-2002 11:02 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

You've described perfectly the coming of love in silence.  I really like this, Bill.
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8 posted 10-12-2002 12:13 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you

This is especially nice! Enjoyed.

Warm Regards,
Pat

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9 posted 10-12-2002 12:28 AM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

This is so lovely Bill. A wonderfully soft read.
SimplyGold
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10 posted 10-12-2002 12:45 AM       View Profile for SimplyGold   Email SimplyGold   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SimplyGold

Bill,

Very nice, I'm ready now for sweet dreams.

SG
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11 posted 10-12-2002 01:17 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Nicely done BC....I see a change in your
style,  and I like it...
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12 posted 10-12-2002 01:21 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Bill - I honestly believe that this is the best poem that I have read by you. Very, very nice, and soooo romantic!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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very seductive
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