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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-10-11 06:25 PM



Whisper my heart
~~~a prayer
to find you, once again,
to know the touch of your lips
on my skin once more.

Whisper my skin
~~~the warm, breath
of your love,
the strength of your arms
hugging my body tight.

Whisper my soul
~~~the light
of your smile,
the soft, brush
of your angel wings.

Whisper eternity to my desire,
whisper timelessness
to my thoughts of you.
Forever whisper my heart
~~~a prayer
~~~~~~~~
of your soul enamored.


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1 posted 2002-10-11 06:44 PM


Soft & lovely. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 2002-10-11 07:00 PM


Beautiful poem!
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3 posted 2002-10-11 07:13 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Ivy, I have missed your gorgeous words so so much, you always make me smile with your wonderful words and this whispers with the purity of romance I wish to always sing to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-11 09:21 PM


Whisper eternity to my desire,
whisper timelessness
to my thoughts of you.
Forever whisper my heart
~~~a prayer
~~~~~~~~
of your soul enamored.
-------------------------------------------
So soft...so beautiful.
You have been missed...please say you'll stay.
~Hugs sweet poetess~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-10-11 10:16 PM


Ivy Rose - most beautiful write, like a song to treasure. Very tender...

BC

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6 posted 2002-10-13 03:07 AM


I'm whispering...James
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7 posted 2002-10-13 03:30 AM


I am whispering praise for your prayerful poem. So gentle, tender and sweet. Lovely.

EA

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8 posted 2002-10-13 05:06 PM


The beauty, gentleness and depth of this lovely poem cannot be whispered.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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9 posted 2002-10-13 05:10 PM


Such lovely words you whisper Ivy Rose.  Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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