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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-11 01:00 PM


(I will repost this on Halloween. But I wanted to see what you thought of it now. I hope you like it. Remember it is just a story.)

An in-mate from jail
Adopted a cat
And decided to kill it

Little did he know
That this little ball of fur
Was going to come back
And get revenge

Now 4 years later
On the night before halloween
The man heard weird noises
Like a cat meow
he knew he killed that cat
Years ago
But he thought to himself
"Did the cat fake it?"

He went about his business
And then he saw
The cat he killed 4 years ago appear

He couldn't believe his eyes
The cat glared at the man
And with one pounce
Was on the man

The next morning
The mans friend walked in
The cat disappeared
And the in-mate was dead
His death was unsolved
But we know what happened
The cat that died
Got his revenge
And that was all

Cold hands means a warm heart

© Copyright 2002 the_loner_23 - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2002-10-11 01:26 PM


This is a very creepy tale, especially for a kitty kicker.  Maybe I should heed the warnings.  Whatta ya think?  n-a-w-w-w-w-w.
SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-10-11 01:34 PM


Nice and spooky.
Irie
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3 posted 2002-10-11 03:32 PM


I guess he got what he deserved!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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4 posted 2002-10-11 04:22 PM


Poor widdle ghost kitty  
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-11 10:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I find it horrible how people can do such things to poor innocent creatures like that! (sigh) This is indeed a horrific poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-10-12 10:31 PM


the_loner_23 - the ghost cat returned, nice tale for Halloween...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2002-10-13 03:04 AM


Once upon a hard time
An itsy bitsy, teeny weeny
Little cat named Halloweeny
Bit the hand that
Didn't feed her
She left him in a prison cell
And there she left him
--Dead as well !!!

EA

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
8 posted 2002-10-14 12:09 PM


And the moral is....................
Don't ever kill a kitty...

A cute Halloween tale, Julie
~ hugs and spooks

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
9 posted 2002-10-15 11:01 PM


Awesome!

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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