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Getting Over You

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Olive_8
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0 posted 09-20-2003 11:31 PM       View Profile for Olive_8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Olive_8

No matter what I tell myself
The pain won't go away
No matter what I try to think
The hurt will always stay

The more I try to help myself
To keep you out of mind
The more I seem to think of you
And your kiss that was so kind

I know we wern't together long
And that things just didn't work
You didn't even tell me face to face
Man you're such a jerk

I cried myself to sleep last nite
Wondering how you feel
Why did you change your mind last nite?
I'm still hoping this can't be real

I know you made up your mind
And there's one thing I can do
The only thing that's left for me
Is to get myself over you


[This message has been edited by Olive_8 (09-22-2003 06:34 PM).]

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1 posted 09-21-2003 04:53 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Getting over someone you love hurts! It's hard but you seem strong enough to do so, since you came to that conclusion by yourself. Best of luck and very good poem! Welcome to Passions!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears


2 posted 09-21-2003 06:32 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

Hey! This was a good choice for your first post. Great work and I can COMPLETELY relate to what you're saying. Heart break is an indescribable pain, in the end everything is gonna be alright...Anyways, great work! Hope to hear more from ya soon! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...


3 posted 09-21-2003 06:58 PM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

WOW! For your first post..this was great! Lots of people will tell you they can relate cuz more people than you think do go through this at least once in their life, myself included. So great job, welcome to Passions and I hope to see more!

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Olive_8
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4 posted 09-22-2003 06:21 PM       View Profile for Olive_8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Olive_8

I just wanted to say thanks for the encouragement to write more poems and that I am glad that I can share these with all of you guys. Writing poetry is something that I do a lot and I am glad if it can help someone else.
Why
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5 posted 09-26-2003 09:24 PM       View Profile for Why   Email Why   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Why

i know what it feels like getting over love i never want to know it again but it still hurts. i loved that poem. thank you
 
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