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Do You Remember

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Deep_Inside
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0 posted 09-19-2003 01:07 PM       View Profile for Deep_Inside   Email Deep_Inside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deep_Inside

does she still...
remember me
does she still remember
how it used to be

childish flirting
picking on one another
to childish to take are emotions
out from under the cover

now older and wiser
childishness long put away
but my child cam back to me
when I saw her that day

good thoughts room long ago
as she played with my hair
talking of old times, and laughing
as we where sitting where

my cares had left me
I have no thought of my home
there are no more worries
of always being alone

all the stress
just drifted from me
as I paid no attention
and just let things be

her soft delicate hand in my hair
caressing my head
Iíve only had this feeling once before
this nirvana, as if I where dead

I can still remember that day
the thoughts linger in my mind
Iím wondering if this maybe
this is something I wanted to find

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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magic_612
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1 posted 09-19-2003 02:35 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

I really liked this one, very full of emotion, and I can also relate to what you are saying. Definately a great job!
 
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