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Depressing Friend

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Nia
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since 09-18-2003
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0 posted 09-19-2003 07:17 AM       View Profile for Nia   Email Nia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nia

To see your face,
to hear your voice.
Those hurtful words,
that careless smile.

     To see her there,
     to hear her laugh.
     Your hurtful words,
     her depressing smile.

          From best friend,
          to no friend.
          With one big step,
          and no in between.

               It's a sad thing,
               when you have to fake a smile.
               Or force yourself to be happy,
               to seem fine and normal.

                    When only you know the truth,
                    that you are slowly going crazy.
                    And slowly slipping,
                    out of reach.
© Copyright 2003 Nia - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


1 posted 09-19-2003 09:24 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Nia!  What an insightful first post!  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Inioth
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since 09-18-2003
Posts 12
Calgary, Alberta


2 posted 09-19-2003 10:03 AM       View Profile for Inioth   Email Inioth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Inioth

That was seriously awesome!!  I can relate to it so much.....having to fake being alright with something....oh that just gave me an Idea......gotta go get this all down
WinterWren
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since 12-01-2002
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...Coming to


3 posted 09-19-2003 03:26 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

First off, Welcome to piptalk!
This is an excellent first post!!!
I really love this poem, and can relate to it well.
Well done.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

peachesNcream
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since 08-21-2001
Posts 521
Ocean Of Tears


4 posted 09-19-2003 09:44 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

For one of your first posts...this was a great choice! Good work and I look forward to reading more of your in the near future! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

 
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