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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 09-18-2003 09:42 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


cold hands grip me and send chills down me
you don't understand what i have become
a transformation held before you eyes
to commit a life not relavent to you
i regret every tear i spent on you
i am still shaking so scared so alone
right now i have forgotten someone
i wish he were here now, because i need him
to hold onto me now because i am falling
still harder to the core
will you be there?

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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...Coming to


1 posted 09-19-2003 12:34 AM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Amazing piece! I especially love the first two lines.
The flow was just right, I really love it.
Thanks for sharing, it's going in my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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blues & greys


2 posted 09-19-2003 01:51 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

you always write such beautiful poetry...

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

Riley
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in the pouring rain


3 posted 09-19-2003 08:17 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

winterwren: thank you so much, this was very spur of the moment not planned nothing....glad you enjoyed.


eor: there are no words that can express my thanks!


riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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