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This is my generation

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Paragon
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0 posted 09-18-2003 08:47 AM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paragon


gasping for breath
grasping for purchase
grabbing in anguish
stabbing to vanquish
shaming to exalt
blaming to fault
sweetening with salt
running to halt
not looking to gawk
timidly playing hawk
wolfishly playing sheep
fighting to sleep
losing to keep
laughing to weep
rallying for peace
protesting for war
abstaining from virginity
feminine virility
potent sterility
distant familiarity
life of such disparity
this is my generation

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River
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1 posted 09-18-2003 10:45 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

very deep, i can tell you spent a lot of time on the rhyming part...great job, i love it. =)

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

Match
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2 posted 09-19-2003 12:17 AM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

The rhyming in this poem rocks, it was a really deep intresting poem
-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

WinterWren
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3 posted 09-19-2003 01:04 AM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

I liked this one, so sad and so true.
Great job, thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Paragon
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4 posted 09-25-2003 08:59 AM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paragon

actually I wrote the whole thing in a matter of minutes.
 
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