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Shiny Diamonds

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Mor-Estal Landis
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since 09-03-2003
Posts 11
Luca, Ventoren


0 posted 09-18-2003 08:12 AM       View Profile for Mor-Estal Landis   Email Mor-Estal Landis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mor-Estal Landis

Your eyes are like jewels to my mind,
No greater treasure could I ever find.

A golden heart, a diamond in the rift,
Your love is like a celestial gift.

your soul is deep and sacred,
I still can't believe an angel lik you hasn't been taken.

Your skin is a canvas and your face the priceless art.
I'm an incomplete puzzle, and your my missing part.

The songs you sing continue to ring,
Like an angel's harp as it sings.

And the tears your cry are so innocent and pure,
When you weep I'll be your cure.

The way you move is like a dance,
I'd like to kiss your soft lips, please just one chance.

You're my star, my only hope in the dark,
My light, my shining ray, my holy ark.

Becasue in a world of fake gold I'm finding,
That because of you, most of these days are shiny diamonds.
© Copyright 2003 Mor-Estal Landis - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
Posts 197
NB, Canada


1 posted 09-18-2003 09:30 AM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

aww that was awesome! Thanks so much for sharing, I really enjoyed it. I also hope to read more of your work
teenpoet
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since 10-17-2001
Posts 287
Michigan


2 posted 09-18-2003 10:43 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

I told you I liked this yesterday and it still holds true.  Great job.  And keep writing.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

Spine Grinder
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since 10-28-2000
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Standing In Silence...


3 posted 09-18-2003 06:22 PM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

Woah.....This was completely different than what I thought it would be when I first clicked on the title...This was awesome and sweet. Great write!

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

 
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