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understanding(please read)

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0 posted 09-17-2003 12:12 AM       View Profile for lauren03   Email lauren03   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lauren03

I wrote this after a fight with a friend, and sometimes more than a friend, and a make-up with an ex, neither of them I can live without. It's kind of different but unique, I think. If you read my other writings, it might be easier to understand.

     You'll never truly understand
     don't even tell me you do, you only pretend
     I've chased you for three years
     around and around we went
     through the times we spent and the times we
     through mine and yours we remained friends
     friends untill you decided to take it further,
     knowing how I truly felt
     I was already with him but, not at the moment
     with my consent it would ruin it all
     the messages sent between us seemed for real
     and yet you still said no, so I sent him a
     You'll never truly understand
     and you don't sit and pretend
     all along you knew my feelings for him
     for awhile you dealed with it
     we were for real, all the "I love yous"
     real tears I cried for you
     but still I died because he was there,
     in my mind, my life, my heart....
     fights were the beginning
     lonely days led to nights with him
     that led to the end of us for awhile
     I found myself with him and then with you
     around and around we went
     back to him back to you
     lieing I tried and still I died because one I
     didn't have, this you'll never understand...
Two different guys and one different girl, sure I should pick, stick with one is what they say........
this no one understands
     I love two people very different from one
     both started from friendships
     one is lingering.... one is gone
     he said he was done....
     it wasn't my fault!
     the other said he wishes to be with me...
     but what have I done?
     it wasn't my fault!
     I love two different people, that makes it my
     why can't I have both?
     both make me happy both make me sad
     with neither I am lost, with one there's the
     cost of the loss of the other...........
     this i don't understand......
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Standing In Silence...

1 posted 09-17-2003 05:10 PM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

I liked this. I've been through this kind of thing before, and its so hard, I know, but it'll fade out eventually. Take care and good write.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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since 09-18-2003
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Calgary, Alberta

2 posted 09-18-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for Inioth   Email Inioth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Inioth

This was so cool to see something like this from a girls perspective....I mean poetry wise....I dunno a lot of my work people say is depressing but it's all been written over time, when I'm mad sad angry whatever so ya most of it does look depressing but ya some of my stuff deals with the same thing from a guys perspective.....very interesting indeed
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