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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
I wrote this after a fight with a friend, and sometimes more than a friend, and a make-up with an ex, neither of them I can live without. It's kind of different but unique, I think. If you read my other writings, it might be easier to understand. Steve, You'll never truly understand don't even tell me you do, you only pretend I've chased you for three years around and around we went through the times we spent and the times we wasted through mine and yours we remained friends friends untill you decided to take it further, knowing how I truly felt I was already with him but, not at the moment with my consent it would ruin it all the messages sent between us seemed for real and yet you still said no, so I sent him a message... Tyler, You'll never truly understand and you don't sit and pretend all along you knew my feelings for him for awhile you dealed with it we were for real, all the "I love yous" real tears I cried for you but still I died because he was there, in my mind, my life, my heart.... fights were the beginning lonely days led to nights with him that led to the end of us for awhile I found myself with him and then with you around and around we went back to him back to you lieing I tried and still I died because one I didn't have, this you'll never understand... Two different guys and one different girl, sure I should pick, stick with one is what they say........ this no one understands I love two people very different from one another both started from friendships one is lingering.... one is gone he said he was done.... it wasn't my fault! the other said he wishes to be with me... but what have I done? it wasn't my fault! I love two different people, that makes it my fault? why can't I have both? both make me happy both make me sad with neither I am lost, with one there's the cost of the loss of the other........... this i don't understand...... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this. I've been through this kind of thing before, and its so hard, I know, but it'll fade out eventually. Take care and good write. "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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Inioth Junior Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 12Calgary, Alberta |
This was so cool to see something like this from a girls perspective....I mean poetry wise....I dunno a lot of my work people say is depressing but it's all been written over time, when I'm mad sad angry whatever so ya most of it does look depressing but ya some of my stuff deals with the same thing from a guys perspective.....very interesting indeed |
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