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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-09-16 09:04 PM



When the last tear falls,
I will look upon the sky,
For the drop of comfort,
I shall need for the strength,
....to carry on.

When the last tear falls,
I will call upon my love,
That is for only one,
I shall announce it everlasting,
....deep inside my heart.

When the last tear falls,
I shall look at this world,
Through these exhausted eyes,
To recognize defeat,
....of this darkness.

When the last tear falls,
These walls shall feel my pain,
That has plagued me for so long,
To relieve myself of this pressure,
....that I shall forget.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-09-16 09:12 PM


Yep, yep! This was another GREAT poem of yours! Remember: chit itches!!!! LOL. But yeah that's how awesome it is!  ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

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