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Toasty
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since 06-09-2003
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my little hole in wisconsin


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who will fill me up
what will make me cry
when will I care
why do I die

when I look in my mirror
I see an empty space
calling out for something
when will I find my place

why do I ache so badly
for a love I just can't name
fleeing from my emotions
why can't I be the same

what will make me happy
and fill me with delight
chase away the darkness
what will make me light

who will be the one
to save me

when will I find the passion
to care

what will be the thing
that drives me

     why am I surrounded
yet noone is there?

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

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magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
Posts 197
NB, Canada


1 posted 09-16-2003 08:31 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

wow that made me speechless! I really liked it.. great job!
Toasty
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my little hole in wisconsin


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thanks!

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

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