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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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pen's prick the tip of ink-stained secrets seeping into paper's core under skin blackness spreading painted eyes watching words as they form my elixir of Utopia soul speaks the tongue of poetry laced with my bones sever my wrists and you will see me bleed poetry it is mingled in my veins crimson and azure coloration for expressions to silence my hunger for words simply satisfied For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
ohhh...this was so amazing, i loved it....chills * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Oh man I've missed reading your work. This was amazing! Great expression of how a true poet feels. Into my library this goes! Have a spiffy day! ~Angela |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i think you do indeed have poetry running through your veins  great job!!!"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
wow, great job!! this was an awesome poem. seriously, it rocked. great imagery and a very cool idea. |
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