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Elixir

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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time


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pen's prick
the tip of
ink-stained
secrets
seeping
into
paper's core
under skin
blackness
spreading
painted eyes
watching words
as they form
my elixir of Utopia

soul speaks
the tongue of poetry
laced with my bones
sever my wrists
and you will see
me
bleed poetry
it is mingled in my veins
crimson
and azure
coloration for expressions
to silence my hunger
for words
simply satisfied

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

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in the pouring rain


1 posted 09-16-2003 09:46 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

ohhh...this was so amazing, i loved it....chills

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Song_for_Serenity
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since 05-28-2003
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2 posted 09-17-2003 12:44 AM       View Profile for Song_for_Serenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Song_for_Serenity

Oh man I've missed reading your work. This was amazing! Great expression of how a true poet feels. Into my library this goes! Have a spiffy day!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

River
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my own little world


3 posted 09-18-2003 09:24 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

i think you do indeed have poetry running through your veins great job!!!

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

young_blood
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since 09-19-2003
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Indianapolis, IN


4 posted 09-19-2003 09:20 PM       View Profile for young_blood   Email young_blood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for young_blood

wow, great job!! this was an awesome poem. seriously, it rocked. great imagery and a very cool idea.
 
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