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*Dark Princess*
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lost in the shadows


0 posted 09-16-2003 12:12 AM       View Profile for *Dark Princess*   Email *Dark Princess*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Dark Princess*


Confusion in my head,
running constantly like a stream.
When the storms come,
the confusion flows over the banks.
Too much to flow between the shores.
Exploding into a flood of anger and pain.

© Copyright 2003 Jessica Claire Spear - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-17-2003 11:13 PM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

I like this, tho I feel it doesn't seem done maybe you could work on it..maybe not  

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

[This message has been edited by Match (09-17-2003 11:14 PM).]

 
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