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Love: A Blurry Past

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peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears


0 posted 09-15-2003 09:32 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for peachesNcream

My past is but a blur,
Once I could just grasp what I had,
I have been blinded by lies,
My trust was misused and thrown down the drain,
No longer will I be able to love,
It takes time they say,
Oh how I hope it does...

I seem to be moving on to sunnier days,
Slowly thinking less of you,
Rarely appearing,
At least for a short period of time,
Then you come right back,
Right back to haunt my thoughts and my dreams,
How cruel love can be...
Will it ever change?
Is there someone real for me?
Will another door open and let the other close?
Is there a true love waiting for me?

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

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BabieDoll
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BFE


1 posted 09-16-2003 04:01 PM       View Profile for BabieDoll   Email BabieDoll   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabieDoll

I really liked this...because, well, I can relate. It's hard...but you have to 'take each day at a time' ( how much is THAT used?! ) So yeah, brighter days are ahead...love you.

~J.Lynn


**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (09-16-2003 04:02 PM).]

SilentTears
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Lost and Broken


2 posted 09-16-2003 08:28 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

Wow, I really like this. It seems to be that, even though your writing has always been good, it's improving. This one was beautiful. It also hit home...quite hard. In any case...I loved this piece. Nice write. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

 
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