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Fall For You

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peachesNcream
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since 08-21-2001
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Ocean Of Tears


0 posted 09-13-2003 11:10 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for peachesNcream

This season, I dedicate to you,
My tears drop steady as the leaves,
Reminisense of summer days with you,
Each day goes slower than the last,
With you in my thoughts,
I try to push you away,
You never leave for long,
Soon...my thoughts will cease,
I shall cherish our memories,
And move on to days without rain and drear,
Why I dedicate this season to you,
It's the first one I won't...
"Fall For You."

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

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magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
Posts 197
NB, Canada


1 posted 09-14-2003 08:38 AM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

this is an awesome poem.. I really liked how you compared your tears to the leaves falling. Great job as always
SilentTears
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since 02-15-2003
Posts 373
Lost and Broken


2 posted 09-14-2003 08:21 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

OOOOO, I LOVE THIS! I've read this before...the other night. After I was done reading, I just sat there in complete and total "Awe." This poem is quite beautiful. Depressing but beautiful. Ha, the story of our lives. Anyway...this poem, you say, turned out better than you expected, but I do believe that all of your poems turn out that way. I think this may be one of my favorites of yours. I love it. Keep writing! Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

dizzyblondeme
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since 08-27-2003
Posts 12
NE, England


3 posted 09-16-2003 02:59 PM       View Profile for dizzyblondeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dizzyblondeme

I really like what you've done here. With the metaphors of the 'fall' - Great!
Song_for_Serenity
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since 05-28-2003
Posts 97
USA


4 posted 09-17-2003 12:42 AM       View Profile for Song_for_Serenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Song_for_Serenity

Hey there! Great poem. I haven't been at site in a while and this was the first post I read on my visit back. Great job! Keep up the good work!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

monkey
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since 09-16-2003
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5 posted 09-17-2003 07:06 PM       View Profile for monkey   Email monkey   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for monkey

wow! this was a great poem. keep up the great job!
 
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