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The First Kiss

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BabieDoll
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0 posted 09-13-2003 12:34 PM       View Profile for BabieDoll   Email BabieDoll   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for BabieDoll

Sweet words you whisper to me
In the security of the starlit night.
Two souls in a world all their own...
I clear my mind to focus only on
The way your eyes sparkle in the moonlight,
And how your hair slightly blows with the breeze.

A touch of your hand upon my cheek...
I close my eyes as the scent of your skin
Now becomes a permanent scent to me.
You smile is soft, and welcoming me
To press mine against yours urgently;
As the passion unfolds between us.

Closer I move to you as you gently
Take my hair and place in behind my ear.
Cautiously you inch closer and closer to me
Until I finally come to feel your breath on my neck;
Our noses barely touch as you
Take your time in caressing my lips...

Once they meet, after much confidence has been gained,
The kiss seems to last for hours on end;
Only pausing slightly to take a quick breath.
When finally we do part, I look deep into you
With extreme satisfaction and astonishment;
Forever will that be the kiss that stole my heart...

And as the night went on and the moon beamed down,
I knew that moment would last for all eternity...*


**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (09-13-2003 04:45 PM).]

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angel eyez
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1 posted 09-13-2003 12:53 PM       View Profile for angel eyez   Email angel eyez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel eyez

hey well this is a great poem i really liked it and i could actually realte to what you were talking about i hope to read more from you!

                   angel eyez.
peachesNcream
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2 posted 09-13-2003 01:55 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

This was AWESOME! The imagery was great, along with everything else. I'm kinda speechless at the moment...but great work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

magic_612
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3 posted 09-13-2003 02:50 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

aww so sweet! I know exactly what you mean here cause I wrote a poem about a first kiss too. Great job! full of emotion and very descriptive
SilentTears
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4 posted 09-13-2003 03:14 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

I tried to read this the other day while walking in the hallway. Now that I read it again, and I'm really able to take it in...it captured me. From beginning to end. This is quite a beautiful piece, Jenn. It's almost scary how close it hits home...Heh. Anyway...this was aboslutely beautiful. As close to perfect as it could possibly be. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

 
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