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Dustin462
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since 08-09-2002
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0 posted 09-12-2003 05:28 PM       View Profile for Dustin462   Email Dustin462   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dustin462


Tears fall to floor
Shattering on impact
Shards seperate themselves
Across the room
You can't see the hurt
You can't see the anger
Nothing is there
Except transparent pain
© Copyright 2003 Dustin A. T. - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
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1 posted 09-13-2003 02:53 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

I really liked he use of the words "transparent pain".. good job
anya
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since 07-27-2002
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2 posted 09-13-2003 04:00 PM       View Profile for anya   Email anya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anya

Short and to the point, you created an interesting and clear image here, there isnt a word wasted in this poem which is always a good thing! well done
anya
 
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