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Lexy
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0 posted 09-11-2003 08:58 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lexy

I want to be a color,
I don't care which one,
it's your call.
Something other then black.

The scent your hands leave along my skin,
it's addictive.
And I've got a silly smirk upon my face.
Rubber bands bolted to my cheeks.
Because your eyes are blue.

My eyes are yellow my hair is black.
There are evergrowing contrasts.
Label me.
I'm feeding off of your dead skin,
falling onto my red tonuge.
The one you finger painted that day.

I'm thinking of trading it in.
Grab some windex and just wipe me from your mirror.
© Copyright 2003 Alexis Smith - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
Posts 197
NB, Canada


1 posted 09-12-2003 05:07 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

wow I really liked this one, great job!
Match
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since 07-01-2002
Posts 287
Canada Edmonton


2 posted 09-12-2003 06:12 PM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

This was awsome!

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

anya
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Posts 397
london england


3 posted 09-13-2003 04:12 PM       View Profile for anya   Email anya   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anya

I love to read something different and this certainly was unique...there's an energy in this poem that really came through. Well done with this,
anya

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Toasty
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my little hole in wisconsin


4 posted 09-17-2003 08:15 PM       View Profile for Toasty   Email Toasty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toasty

interesting...there's so much energy in this. Descriptive and emotional. Keep up the good work.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

Jaime
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my little hole in wisconsin


5 posted 09-20-2003 01:17 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jaime

I heart you, Lexy.

This is the kind of poem I love to read. Images, mixed meanings (perhaps some sexual undertones, or maybe thats just me), emotional yet not gushing, and devoid of overused poetics. Wonderful.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

baby1231
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6 posted 09-20-2003 10:45 AM       View Profile for baby1231   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for baby1231

i loved this one

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Why
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since 09-26-2003
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7 posted 09-27-2003 05:06 PM       View Profile for Why   Email Why   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Why

great poem. very original. im looking forward to more
AlostHeart
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8 posted 09-29-2003 10:36 AM       View Profile for AlostHeart   Email AlostHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AlostHeart

This is very different but i still like it.

Is it just me but aren't we terrorists as well.Going over seas just to aise some hell.

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