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Requiem for You

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WinterWren
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...Coming to


0 posted 09-10-2003 01:33 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren


You're visbly cooling in my hands
have I let you down
did I not live up to what you expected me to be?
You always said I was good enough for you, just the way I was.

Will I always be wondering where you went
or will I someday stumble upon the truth?
You're still in the back of my mind
can I never be free of your presence?!

You still live in a sad part of my soul
where all things stay that I cared too much for to let go
and you still haunt me on some days
the days when nothing can make me smile.

I can't say I wish we'd never met
but sometimes I wish I could go back to those days
and change a few things
though you still would be gone in the end.

And I have to wonder what the future would've been
if you were still here
I can't cry enough tears for you
and for the happiness that might have come.

Don't let go, please
hold on, for me
I've stopped hoping
and I've given up waiting
please tell me you're still here.

There are so many days when you still haunt me
I can never cry enough tears for you
I need you here with me,
don't let the darkness take you.

Please tell me you're still here!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears


1 posted 09-10-2003 06:14 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

WOW! This was...amazing. It just about brought tears to my eyes, your words feel so familiar to me. Great work and thanks for the read! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

monkey
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2 posted 11-19-2003 01:48 PM       View Profile for monkey   Email monkey   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for monkey

awwwwww! very good poem! except i had to ask mom what requiem meants!
monkey
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3 posted 11-19-2003 01:49 PM       View Profile for monkey   Email monkey   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for monkey

awwwwww! very good poem! except i had to ask mom what requiem meants!
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