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teenpoet
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0 posted 09-03-2003 10:37 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for teenpoet

Guys are a dangerous thing
Of another species than me
thoughts different than mine
motives strange to me
I can't know what exactly they mean
don't know a lie from the truth
can tell a casual touch apart
from something more
I don't know the difference
and I think I may need to
You hug me and hold me by your side
tickle me and make fun of me
but then a friend says to me
a friend of his too
that he does that with every girl
but I don't want to believe that
even though I know it's the truth
sometimes I wonder how I manage
to live from day to day
when I can't understand simple
little things such as
You

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

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teenpoet
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1 posted 09-04-2003 09:47 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Hey so maybe you're wondering about the title of this poem because it seems to have nothing to do with the poem.

Robbie, a best friend, said I should use the guy, the one the poem's about, I should use his nickname.  His nickname is fluffy.  Nobody really knows why.  I think Brian may have started it.  

But now you know why the poem is called fluffy.

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

Mor-Estal Landis
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2 posted 09-18-2003 08:24 AM       View Profile for Mor-Estal Landis   Email Mor-Estal Landis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mor-Estal Landis

Well, I liked it, human males can be a bit...clueless. It was an awesome piece of work BP.

Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star
"...Shadowed by Darkness, and Stalked by Despair..."

 
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