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teenpoet
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0 posted 2003-09-03 10:37 AM


Guys are a dangerous thing
Of another species than me
thoughts different than mine
motives strange to me
I can't know what exactly they mean
don't know a lie from the truth
can tell a casual touch apart
from something more
I don't know the difference
and I think I may need to
You hug me and hold me by your side
tickle me and make fun of me
but then a friend says to me
a friend of his too
that he does that with every girl
but I don't want to believe that
even though I know it's the truth
sometimes I wonder how I manage
to live from day to day
when I can't understand simple
little things such as
You

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
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1 posted 2003-09-04 09:47 AM


Hey so maybe you're wondering about the title of this poem because it seems to have nothing to do with the poem.

Robbie, a best friend, said I should use the guy, the one the poem's about, I should use his nickname.  His nickname is fluffy.  Nobody really knows why.  I think Brian may have started it.  

But now you know why the poem is called fluffy.

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

Mor-Estal Landis
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since 2003-09-03
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Luca, Ventoren
2 posted 2003-09-18 08:24 AM


Well, I liked it, human males can be a bit...clueless. It was an awesome piece of work BP.

Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star
"...Shadowed by Darkness, and Stalked by Despair..."

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