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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-09-02 06:18 PM


I wish you'd stop invading my mind!
Changing my decisions,
Altering my feelings,
Your presence is driving me mad!
This power that you have over me...
You control every move that I make.
I can't do anything without a thought of you
And it just won't go away!
I recollect the times you held me tightly
And how your voice could calm me instantly,
As I feel I may go insane.
Your sparkling eyes have scarred my memories,
Never allowing me to move on.

The funniest part of it all...
You'll never fully understand how you've impacted me.*



"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (09-02-2003 06:30 PM).]

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SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-09-07 06:36 PM


I love this. I usually get the chance to read all of your poetry before you post it...but I enjoy it just as much when I read it on here. Nice job. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

BrokenAngel
Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
2 posted 2003-09-08 01:50 PM


I can relate to this one.  I have an ex that has done this to me, it sucks don't it?  Anyways, great write!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

dizzyblondeme
Junior Member
since 2003-08-27
Posts 11
NE, England
3 posted 2003-09-10 04:36 PM


Great.  Just great.  I can understand everything in this poem - unfortuantly Really well done!

XxXx J xXxX

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