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Obsolete
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2003-08-29 01:28 AM



Unclear
  of her intentions

Massaging
  the feet of evil

Denying
  her thrown petals

Pushing
  the blanket over me

The blonde opens the book,
randomly selecting a line
I answer the screams..
(It all seems the same)

Neither of you,
reflect the rays of the sun
Keep pressing those buttons,
maybe you'll get lucky

I'm just not attracted..
Perhaps its the golden strands

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-08-30 03:12 PM


interesting...I liked this a lot.

jade dragoness
Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76

2 posted 2003-08-30 03:44 PM


a brilliant write
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