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Declaring Love
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Declaring Love |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
DECLARING LOVE If my heart was a begger, would you toss it crumbs of affection? If my soul was lost, would you give it some directions? If my days were numbered, would you sit there and hold my hand? If my eyes were filled with tears, would you try to understand? If I were standing in the cold, would you offer me your coat? If my mind had an address, would you drop me a note? If I held the sunshine, would you let me heat up your day? If I told you I loved you, ...would you run away? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i wrote this a while ago for someone quite special to me and im not sure if he is still around on this thing. but if he is.. he knows who he is!! ill start postin again. i havent been here for a long long time!! |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
awww this poem was really cute and well written.. great job  |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
This was really good. I hope thigns work out for you and whomever it is you love. "To handle yourself, use your head; to handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird |
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dizzyblondeme Junior Member
since 2003-08-27
Posts 11NE, England |
I like that alot Well DoneYou'r put a really good point into words, I often think things like that about a certain person so I thinked that helped me understand it alot better! Good Luck with you and the person who inspired you to write this! XxXx J xXxX |
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