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A Joke

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Jaime
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0 posted 08-28-2003 11:37 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jaime

Rusty words, ground and
packed away. Away. But they
caught pieces of me
The skin too deep
for hands to receive

White socks stained, and I said,
Everything turns under this sky
Somehow I remain

Here

Somehow I remain

And donít pretend that its
for me, yellow only needed
blue to make green so donít
try to pretend

The divers, they were good
before they died out. They died
submerged inside of me and
the residue sticks to my identity

Ďcause I remember everything

and I donít think its that
important. But my socks are
still stained and the corpses
are still inside of me

and somehow
you thought it would be

funny

082803


the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

Obsolete
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since 06-27-2003
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1 posted 08-29-2003 12:58 AM       View Profile for Obsolete   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Obsolete

Intense.
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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2 posted 08-29-2003 03:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Jeez I love reading you Jaime.

Keeping this

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

gemjop
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since 11-18-2002
Posts 2663
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3 posted 08-30-2003 07:41 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

what maree said.



Instant karma's gonna get you.

Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
Posts 1049
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4 posted 08-30-2003 03:07 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

oh my god. I love how you write. The last line hit me hard. The whole atomsphere of this poem is amazing. wow...
Kandi
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since 06-14-2000
Posts 359
North of Hell


5 posted 09-16-2003 12:13 PM       View Profile for Kandi   Email Kandi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kandi's Home Page   View IP for Kandi

Wow...very impressive. Going in my library.
~Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

peachesNcream
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since 08-21-2001
Posts 521
Ocean Of Tears


6 posted 09-16-2003 04:57 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

As Obsolete said...Intense. I believe they're right! Great work, this was an awesome poem! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


7 posted 09-16-2003 07:35 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Hey Jaime, nice write.  Its been awhile since Ive been in this forum {except the other day}, so Im glad I got to read this.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

BabieDoll
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since 02-13-2003
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BFE


8 posted 09-19-2003 05:35 PM       View Profile for BabieDoll   Email BabieDoll   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabieDoll

This poem blew me away...so full of immense feeling. I loved every bit of it!

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

gemjop
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since 11-18-2002
Posts 2663
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9 posted 09-19-2003 07:54 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

where are you gal? get back n write some more please?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Jaime
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Pencilveinia, USA


10 posted 09-20-2003 01:05 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jaime

I just posted one the other day... "To Be". I've been so busy lately I haven't been able to keep up with posting and replying.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

AlostHeart
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11 posted 09-30-2003 10:21 AM       View Profile for AlostHeart   Email AlostHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AlostHeart

Very intese good write!

Is it just me but aren't we terrorists as well.Going over seas just to aise some hell.

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