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Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity


0 posted 08-27-2003 11:04 PM       View Profile for Pollita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Pollita

Hearing all your criticism,
How I do everything wrong…
Whats the use in trying any more,
If all I do is make you sad.

Wishing I could mean something to you,
That we could just be a family once again.
Its always my fault,
No matter what is the problem…

Your image of me,
Isn’t the thing I wish it were.
I guess I have myself to blame,
For us not loving each other.

I want a family,
That I can come home and be thankful for.
But no, when I grow up,
Im going to be a better parent then you ever were.

Im not going to make my child think she was worthless,
That she didn’t mean a thing.
Im not gonna make her cry at night,
Like you have done to me...


* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

[This message has been edited by Pollita (08-28-2003 11:01 PM).]

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yankees01rugby
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since 08-13-2003
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1 posted 08-27-2003 11:07 PM       View Profile for yankees01rugby   Email yankees01rugby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yankees01rugby

great write! that is EXACTLY how i feel about my family. thanks for expressing those feelings so prefectly.

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

poems_rocks_01
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2 posted 09-19-2003 10:46 PM       View Profile for poems_rocks_01   Email poems_rocks_01   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for poems_rocks_01

hey delaney,

you are the best poet ever!!!you should be a poet when you are older (i am so serious)(not joking at all)you know you need to teach me how to write like that......

          k talk to you later bye byes

             from your friend
               christina
 
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