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Teen Poetry #6

Upon Hollow Ears

Obsolete
Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-08-27 02:35 AM

It's funny..
two seperate situations,
mutated into the same problem

You have been here for years,
consistently strong
Never has there been a point,
where it was about you
Long hours were worked,
not a complaint uttered
Now this plague is upon you,
I can't say it enough..
I appreciate you

And you..
Only for an instance,
but a flash I enjoyed
You buried your head,
under my arms that night
(I'm not sure if I'm ready yet)
But like the other,
I relish every second
Just in case there is a time,
that I can't tell you

It goes unsaid..
but that is the beautiful thing
As long as we know it

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2003-08-27 02:50 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. I found it to be unique and creative and most importantly honest. It's important to appreciate the ones we love, whatever our relationship to them may be.
Excellent write.
~Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

2 posted 2003-08-29 11:50 PM

As long as its known...

...the appreciation there, then its not a chore. Then its nothing lost.

Sometimes I forget though. And I wish he'd say something...

and sometimes I wish for silence.

Wonderful poem.

jupiter.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

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