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Your Special Place
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Your Special Place |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
What do you do when you need to go somewhere? Somewhere no one knows where you are A place you can relax, Get away from everyone and everything. A place you can call your own, Your special place. Where would you go? What would you do there? How would you get there? Who would you bring there? What do you do when that place is no where to be found? Every where you look, Someone’s there, Something’s there, There’s no where else to go, There’s no place to call you special place. Where would you go? What would you do there? How would you get there? Who would you bring there? What if you needed your special place even more now? You don’t want to be with anyone anymore, You don’t enjoy the things you used to, You don’t hang with your friends anymore. You need to talk to someone, But no ones there to listen. Where would you go? What would you do there? How would you get there? Who would you take there? What would you do without your special place? You give up on everything and everyone, You don’t care what happens. You need to be alone, But there’s always someone there, You use the knife in your hand. Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out [This message has been edited by yankees01rugby (08-26-2003 11:19 PM).] |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
thanks for posting this poem.. I am also having a really bad day and this seemed to help a little. You were totally saying how I feel.. when you move to a new city i gets very lonely and I feel extremely down. Thanks again and great work. Hope things look up for you. |
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SenSitiveSaLLy New Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 5in an alternate universe |
this poem reminds me of my special place. there is no place better to be to clear my thoughts and relax. awesome poem... |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
im glad people like this poem! can anyone give me some ideas of where i can find a place like this cause i really need one? Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out |
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