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Heartbroken Forever
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Heartbroken Forever |
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HeartacheEveryMoment New Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 4 |
~My feelings were broken My feelings were nothing at all My feelings weren't good enough for you I sit here in the corner Craving a broken-heart on my arm Cause i know i'll always be heartbroken forever and ever I cry the tears of pain I pray to God Praying for me to get over you But its to hard because how much i love you Words that caused me to break down Lies that caused me to get angered Trust which are the words "I Love You" i'll never trust again The pain of the razorblade is the pain you put me through Blood drips through my arm is the blood of love Love of my heart for you is nothing to all I sit in the corner Craving a broken-heart on my arm Cause i know i'll be heartbroken forever and ever~ [This message has been edited by HeartacheEveryMoment (08-20-2003 09:29 PM).] |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this poem was really good.. but really sad.. just remember, your rainbow will always come out after the rain. I know it seems rough now, but love will happen again. Good job  |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was a nice write! Good work... My favorite lines were "The pain of the razorblade is the pain you put me through Blood drips through my arm is the blood of love..."! A broken heart takes time to heal, it's a wound...just in a different form. GREAT WORK! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
Hey, great poem... I understand how you're feeling... I say quote: Explains the pain all too well... only time heals the pain of a heratache... It's not that time just yet |
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