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Teen Poetry #6

Eternity

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

0 posted 2003-08-20 12:57 PM

Now is the time, here is the place.
I gave you my heart, my mind, and my soul,
Now I give you the rest of me;
The ultimate expression of love.

Our love runs deep,
Flowing like the blood in our veins.
Our hearts are one and the same,
Beating together with the union of our love.

Your hands, wound in my hair,
Your eyes, getting lost in mine,
Your lips, taunting me, teasing me;
Leading me into erotic bliss.

We're free to love as we please,
Together, our love is unbridled.
The anticipation grows stronger, the end coming near;
The hill is no longer a mountain.

Finally we reach the top,
A thousand fireworks going off at once.
It's so powerful, so moving.
It's like a volcano blowing it's top.

But when the explosions are done
And movement has subsided,
We lay together, calm and serene,
Wanting only eternity.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (08-20-2003 08:45 PM).]

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-08-20 03:55 PM

I like this this, very descriptive. Good job.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

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