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Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-08-19 05:57 PM



Reflections of the person I want to be,
Are merely hopes, and they explode in my face.
My dreams will cease to exist,
If only my life traded places with my dreams.

I wouldn’t be able to feel pain,
Upset people by my sorrowful attitude.
I came back to reality,
With a long glimpse of the person I am.

Confused, and pathetic…
That’s all I am, and ever will be.
I mean nothing,
I never did…

Although I wonder,
Maybe, could I mean something to you.
Could I be the one you look at,
And fall in love with, the one you need.

Am I her..?
Or is she just a figment of your imagination.
Wondering what if,
Im here, in front of you….
      
     Alone,
         Tortured by reality,
                       Awaiting your decision

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2003-08-19 10:24 PM


I like this. Its very descriptive and real. I've felt some of those same feelings. Good job.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

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