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Teen Poetry #6

Trapped Spirit Lost Soul

HeartacheEveryMoment
New Member

since 2003-08-19

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-08-19 11:51 AM

Trapped Spirit Lost Soul

The days of being alone in the dark always been a fear
Whisper of the night tells us Ghosts of the Unkown lingers near
The rise of dead comes back to haunt to me
Voices of the dead echos in my head
Saying to me i rather be off dead
The spiritless of the dead flows through the foggy night
as i know they'll be back for me
Whispers of the night gets heavier as the
Ghost of the Unknown lingers near
As i lay here here alone, cold, a trapped spirit, a lost soul
The shadows of the Ghost of the unkown show upon my bed
as they take my soul, I belong to Them

As Well Take You

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-08-20 10:02 AM

hey and welcome! Good poem.. hope to read more in the future

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-20 10:03 AM

hey and welcome! Good poem.. hope to read more in the future

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2003-08-20 11:28 AM

This was a good first post. Dark, sad, and good. Hope to see more, and welcome to Piptalk.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-08-20 12:46 PM

First of all, Welcome to Passions. I really like this poem. it's dark, kinda twisted, my favorite kind. LoL. I hope to see more from you.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

5 posted 2003-08-20 07:31 PM

YAY
i love reading new members poetry, its a taste of something different.
this one was really well, hope to see more
welcome to PIP

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