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lovergirl
Junior Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 12

0 posted 2003-08-18 09:28 PM

I look at you. You look at me.
You should see exactly what I see.
So why don't you treat me like what you're seeing?
Why don't you treat me like a human being?
You can't see how much I'm hurt.
You can't see the hole that you've burnt.
You've burnt a hole deep down in my heart.
We don't have to be so far apart.
If you could see how I feel inside,
Then maybe, just maybe, you'll see how I survive.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-08-18 11:43 PM

Hello and welcome to Piptalk! I'm sure you'll like it here!

This poem was a good choice for your first post! I espically liked the last few lines. Good work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-19 01:22 AM

Hey and welcome to PipTalk!

Thx for the great read. I could really relate and it hit home for me. Keep posting!

A life without love…is no life at all.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-08-19 10:25 AM

Welcome to Passions!

This was an awesome first post. You expressed your feelings well. I could really relate. I hope to see more from you.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-20 10:05 AM

Welcome to piptalk! very good poem.. hope to see more of your work

Ashley

*When you were born you were the one crying when everyone else was smiling, Live your like so that when you die you are the one smiling when everyone

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2003-08-20 11:30 AM

Welcome to Piptalk! This was a good first post, you don't have to restrict yourself to only rhyming poems, but if thats what you like, then keep it up the nice work.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-20-2003 11:31 AM).]

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