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A Story Unwritten

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 08-17-2001
Posts 515
LI, New York


0 posted 08-18-2003 08:08 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

A story I will tell you
of lovers far apart
with a love so true
forever joined at heart

A picture you will see
faded and covered with dust
yet through itís well-worn misery
the eyes yet shine with lust

A man you will meet
a heart all but dead
Youíll walk with his feet
and witness all his dread

A woman you shall know
a hope almost gone
and with her youíll go
as she tries to carry on

Together they will come
from distant worlds apart
as two become one
together in one heart

With them you shall walk,
through the trials of life,
hear them laugh, cry, and talk
witness great joy and strife

To go with them
you are bidden
as they strive
this story unwritten

Forever I will stand
always here with you.
Now stay and hold my hand
and together we'll go somewhere new.
~Rich~
© Copyright 2003 Richard H. Dikeman - All Rights Reserved
BabieDoll
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since 02-13-2003
Posts 271
BFE


1 posted 08-19-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for BabieDoll   Email BabieDoll   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabieDoll

GREAT poem!!!!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

peachesNcream
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since 08-21-2001
Posts 521
Ocean Of Tears


2 posted 08-19-2003 06:05 PM       View Profile for peachesNcream   Email peachesNcream   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peachesNcream

I'm just about speechless over your poem! This was spectular! I loved the title and how it fits this piece so well. A new one for my libraray! Great work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Spine Grinder
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since 10-28-2000
Posts 1147
Standing In Silence...


3 posted 08-19-2003 08:34 PM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

I liked this! Very cool, nice job.

"Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~

WinterWren
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since 12-01-2002
Posts 1044
...Coming to


4 posted 08-20-2003 12:58 AM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Hey, nice to see you posting again!
I must say, this was an amazing poem!
I think you're improving! I didn't think that was possible!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

BrokenDreams
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since 02-09-2003
Posts 432
In The Clouds


5 posted 08-20-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for BrokenDreams   Email BrokenDreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrokenDreams

This was really good. I liked it a lot.
-Jen

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (08-20-2003 01:13 PM).]

jaysh
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since 04-16-2003
Posts 141
IL, USA


6 posted 08-20-2003 03:44 PM       View Profile for jaysh   Email jaysh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaysh

great write!
SilentTears
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since 02-15-2003
Posts 373
Lost and Broken


7 posted 08-20-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

Nice...that's all I can say. Very nice. Loved it!

Goin' in my library

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

Cinderelly
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since 12-31-2001
Posts 190
NM, USA


8 posted 08-25-2003 01:50 AM       View Profile for Cinderelly   Email Cinderelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderelly

Wow! this is amesome! Great write

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

yankees01rugby
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since 08-13-2003
Posts 54
USA


9 posted 08-25-2003 05:01 PM       View Profile for yankees01rugby   Email yankees01rugby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yankees01rugby

this is a great poem...im speechless! to my library it goes!

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

Toasty
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since 06-09-2003
Posts 76
my little hole in wisconsin


10 posted 08-27-2003 06:37 PM       View Profile for Toasty   Email Toasty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toasty

amazing, simply amazing.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

WindSong
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since 12-23-2002
Posts 316
Long Island, New York


11 posted 10-03-2003 10:36 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Awww.... how sweet its enough to make me vomit..peace...<3 Kiki

It was really good though

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

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