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yankees01rugby
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since 2003-08-13
Posts 48
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0 posted 2003-08-18 03:45 PM



One little girl
Alone in a corner.
No one seems to see her,
No one seems to care.

One little boy
Playing on the field.
His thoughts no where
But on the little girl.

One little girl
Alone in a corner.
No one seems to care
She no longer thinks they should.

One little boy
Dancing on the floor.
His thoughts on the girl
So much stronger than before.

One young lady
Alone in a corner.
No one remembers her,
She remembers them 10 years before.

One young man
Reuniting with old friends.
Building up courage
To ask the girl on a date.

One young lady
Has her name in the paper.
Under the headline,
'Woman takes life'

One young man
Reads the paper.
His thoughts on the girl
"Who would do such a STUPID thing?"

One young man
Speakng to children.
His message is true and strong,
"There's always something better"

*It's hard to tell your mind to stop lovin someone when your heart still does*

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SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-08-18 11:24 PM


I really like this poem. It's very depressing...but I really love the message you're sending. Beautiful poem.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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