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Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-08-17 08:31 PM


How were you expected to stay,
In this house condemned in hate.
With all these memories,
All the things you were forced to endure.

The past repeating itself,
Only this time it has a good cause.
You’re leaving all the yelling, the crying,
I admire your strength.

It probably wont be to long,
Before I follow your example.
Leave this hell,
And move on with my life.

We’re tearing away from each other,
I still love you though.
Your leaving is destroying me,
Breaking me into shattered pieces, never reaching an end.

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

[This message has been edited by Pollita (08-17-2003 11:36 PM).]

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cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2003-08-17 08:44 PM


you still manage to amaze me with your writing, del. this though, with its sensitive nature, is heart-wrenching.  i just hope you'll get to see kris every-so often to help get you through losing her.

-cheri

fall quietly...

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