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Krystin18
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since 2003-01-19
Posts 20
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-16 11:36 PM


Shivers run down her spine,
The floor is cold and hard on her back.
"GET OFF ME" she screams,
As she struggles to hold him back,
"SHUT UP" he yells,
As he easily overpowers her.
Pain seeps through her body as he forces her legs apart,
Anger wells up inside her that she never knew was there.
A sheer scream from her bounces off the dark cellar walls,
"WHY IS HE DOING THIS?" her frightened mind questions.
She feels his throbbing manhood enter her body,
Wimpering she wrestles him to try to get free.
"oh please someone help me" she pleads into the emptiness,
But there is no one to hear her and he knows this.
The pain of him ripping her open seizes her body,
She shakes uncontrollably with fright and hate.
"You like that whore?" He whispers in her ear,
Unable to reply she crys instead.
She bites his hand as he holds her down,
So he punches her with all his might.
Another bruise shes gained from him,
She secretly knows it wont be the last.
He finishes inside her,
She is digusted by what has just happened,
But is in too much agony to cry or to think.
He gets up and laughs,
"You stupid bitch, you squirm to much",
A smirk spreads across his evil face.
"But i lasted longer with you than the others"
She nodds and curls up into a ball,
And he leaves her naked there on the solid cement floor.
Speaking and moving are unthinkable actions for her right now,
All that she can feel is the incredible seering pain.
Looking around her she sees blood on the floor,
Knowing it came from inside her,
From what he had done,
She turns over and pukes at the revolting sight.
Three hours go by  but she doesnt care,
To her the floor is now her home.
She screams as loud as she can to let out her anger,
He has scarred her forever.
Feeling dirty and soiled,
She hasnt moved in a while,
He stole her innocence and didnt even care,
"how can people do this?!!!" she whispers to herself.
Looking over she seems light seeping through the door,
The horrified expression of her brother seeing her naked on the floor.
He screams, runs and picks her up in his arms,
"I'm sorry" she cries into his comforting arms.
"I Love you" he says and then begins to cry,
"I can't belive somone did this to you".
She tells him what happened,
While tears still stream from his eyes.
"Lets Get Outta Here" he says and picks her up,
Together they walk out of that place forever
Waking up,
I scream,
I'm getting sick of these dreams.
I bow my head low and cry into my sheets,
"Why did you have to scar me forever,
I'm tired of always being afraid"
I lay back down and try to be calm.
Closing my eyes is no longer peaceful,
There lay the visions of what you did to me.
I was a joke,
Just a game,
Another score for you,
I will never forgive you for what you've put me through.


THIS IS DEFINTELY A WORK IS PROGESS, DOENST FLOW TO WELL, BUT ID LIKE TO KNOW WHAT U THINK ANYWAYS

[This message has been edited by Krystin18 (08-16-2003 11:39 PM).]

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magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-17 01:41 PM


this is a very powerful write, I really like it. So tragic.. wow.. definately well written. The story seemed so real.. good job.
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