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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-08-16 10:31 PM

Each day I do not hear your voice,
Just kills me all the more.
My soul is slowly dying
As I ache for just one more kiss.
My heart now beats painfully
Thinking of never again feeling your embrace;
And silently, I die inside,
Letting defeated tears drown my eyes,
Trying desperately to wash away my anguish.
Leaving me in dreadful dispair
And lost in a world so cruel.
I no longer have your hand to grasp
When I'm feeling scared and alone.
Only the cars that pass by
Leave shadows to linger upon the walls.
No more smelling the scent of you
On my breast as I lay down to sleep.
No more caresses in the earliest of morning
To awake, once again, in your arms.
My security is now lost
And so I fear, soon my mind.
But shall you never be forgotten,
As the memories of you will still go on.

Constantly reoccuring...
Never to cease...*

~Just so you all know, my boyfriend and I DID break up and this IS about him, but I'm happy to say that we have worked things out and are now back together.

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-08-16 10:37 PM

I'm glad you two are back together! YAY!

This poem was sweet and feels kinda familiar in most parts. Over all, this was a VERY good poem! Good job, hun! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-08-16 11:26 PM

You were at my house when you wrote this! LoL. I liked it when you read it to me the other day...and I like it now. Ha. Nothing's changed...I still love it! But I enjoy most all of your writing. Glad to hear that you guys worked things out. Love's!

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2003-08-17 04:02 AM

hey,
lol when i was reading this i was like 'ah man, that sucks....i hate messy break ups even if they aren't my own' but then at the end you said you are back, so that's super neat...about the actual poem. hmmm...some of it seems like teenage sugary love stuff to me ya know? but that isn't a bad thing. most of us ARE in fact teenagers lol, and i seem to be writing a lot of it lately as well. all in all it was a pretty damn good piece, and i'm glad i got a change to read your stuff.

-bergundy-

no one can make you feel inferior, unless you let them.--eleanor roosevelt

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