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magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-16 06:32 PM


The Kiss


You moved close,
and finally at last
that amazing kiss
It happened so fast.
Your soft gentle lips
brushed against my mouth
made my body shiver,
and shattered all my doubts.
I fell for you instantly
and I knew we'd be together
but no matter what the future holds,
I'll remember that kiss forever.


Well this is the first poem I posted up here, I was a little newvous to post at first, but I hope you guys liked it. I wrote this one for my bf the day after our first kiss.

© Copyright 2003 Ashley Marr - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-08-16 08:02 PM


Aww! This was SO sweet! Good work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-08-16 09:31 PM


um..well this was good. A little hopelssly blind. But me and love don't get along too well, so I think I will leave the room.

magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
3 posted 2003-08-17 05:54 PM


well I'm sorry you felt it was 'blind' , I do appreciate your reply though. I guess I can't help how I feel, I'm sorry you havent had much luck with love, but I am happy and that poem fit the situation perfectly. Thanks for reading
TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 83
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-08-19 01:18 AM


This was so sweet.  I loved it. It really captured my first kiss that i will remember forever as well.  Thx for the read.  

A life without loveā€¦is no life at all.

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
5 posted 2003-08-19 05:27 PM


This poem is good...a little naive, but still, very good. Hope to see more from you...

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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