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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 08-14-2003 03:44 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

I her someone complaining the other day that poets dont write enough about chees, so i thought i'd give it a try!
I like cheese


Why is it yellow?
Why does it stink?
Why does it stop me up?
like a old rusty sink?

If It is warm then may I go?
because I cant eat,
not one crumb more!

I like cheese,
yes that is true,
but did you know,
that it don't like you?

If you were a cow
and people bothered you,
Think of how
you would be too!

So we like cheese,
good on most,
good on bread,
even on some toast!
I hope you liked my cheesie poem! he he he

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1 posted 08-14-2003 04:37 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

I like cheese, too.. I eat it.

Damn lactose intolerance, though!
BrokenDreams
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2 posted 08-15-2003 10:43 AM       View Profile for BrokenDreams   Email BrokenDreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrokenDreams

cute

I like cheese too.

This really was a nice little poem. It was kinda cool to get away from all the normal poems about lost loves and not being understood. Good job.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

BigFlamingClyde
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3 posted 08-15-2003 02:47 PM       View Profile for BigFlamingClyde   Email BigFlamingClyde   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for BigFlamingClyde


Haha, that was indeed the cheesiest poem I've ever heard, and yeah.. I'd take that over angst any day!

Thanks for the laugh,
- The Big Flaming Clyde
Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 07-05-2004 02:47 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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5 posted 03-06-2006 09:25 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

it is very cheesey. but i like it. i only like melted cheese

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

Ace of Crimson Tears
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6 posted 04-10-2006 10:46 AM       View Profile for Ace of Crimson Tears   Email Ace of Crimson Tears   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Ace of Crimson Tears

That was a nice poem. Very unique. Keep up the good work.

~Matt~
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