Everything Will Work Just Fine..

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Teen Poetry #6

Everything Will Work Just Fine..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-14 03:18 AM

I like to
chew on
wear out the strings..

Yeah,
they kept us together but..
Together isn't such
a calmly spoken word
between us.

I wish for you..
the best..yes..
that's what I said.

And perhaps a final goodbye
would work just fine..

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-08-14 04:40 PM

Ohhhhhhhh my!

This is my life right now...

Oh that final goodbye would be so sweet...but still he calls...even though he is now married and I am seeing someone else...sigh

This was like a punch in the gut! Excellent!

Susan

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-14 09:03 PM

Wow, this is exceptonally good. So lightly written but with so much meaning.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-08-14 09:28 PM

Oh my...this poem was great! I REALLY like this. The whole concept...the way you worded it, how it flowed...everything! Awesome! I'm definitely going to be looking for some more of your work! Nice!

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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