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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 02:39 PM




Often cime is everywhere,
And all the people around do is stare.
Now children are being neglected and abused,
Yet the whole world is dazed and confused.
People are standing hungry on the street,
With nothing to eat and no shoes on their feet.
I guess you live the life in which yo choose,
And the whole world is dazed and confused.
Some people are on welfare, no money on hand,
But it's all we can do to try to understand.
Sometimes you may be the one to recieve good news,
But the whole world is dazed and confused.
There are some kids without a father or a mother,
It's as hard for one as it is for another.
Sometimes the ones you love are the ones you lose,
Still the whole world is dazed and confused.

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-08-13 06:03 PM


how true...good honest writing.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-13 08:41 PM


Thank you lexy!

Tequilia

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2004-07-05 02:50 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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