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Dazed and Confused

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


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Often cime is everywhere,
And all the people around do is stare.
Now children are being neglected and abused,
Yet the whole world is dazed and confused.
People are standing hungry on the street,
With nothing to eat and no shoes on their feet.
I guess you live the life in which yo choose,
And the whole world is dazed and confused.
Some people are on welfare, no money on hand,
But it's all we can do to try to understand.
Sometimes you may be the one to recieve good news,
But the whole world is dazed and confused.
There are some kids without a father or a mother,
It's as hard for one as it is for another.
Sometimes the ones you love are the ones you lose,
Still the whole world is dazed and confused.
© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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since 01-28-2003
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California


1 posted 08-13-2003 06:03 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

how true...good honest writing.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


2 posted 08-13-2003 08:41 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Thank you lexy!

Tequilia

Tequilia_Sunrise
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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