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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 08-12-2003 02:47 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise



She lives as someone else. She keeps it all
inside. She doesn't want to talk. She needs
to run and hide. As herself she's shy. As
their friend she's wild. With them she
doesn't care. Within she is a child. She's
scared of truth and light. She hides herself
in dark. She lives behind her lies. She's
lost all of her spark. Her life is somewhat
twisted. She experiments with things. She
tries to fly away from it. She thinks that
she has wings. She wants to live a normal
life. Though she knows not what that is.
She tries to hide the hurting. Friends don't
notice this. I met her once before. I asked
myself, "who's she?" Now comes to me the
answer. The introvert is me.

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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1 posted 08-12-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

She wants a normal life, though she knows not what that is. Good line. And a great poem. Yes I myself am an introvert.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-12-2003 08:30 PM).]

Tequilia_Sunrise
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2 posted 08-12-2003 09:53 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Im glad you enjoyed it, thankx for the comments

Tequilia

Alnilam
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3 posted 08-12-2003 10:07 PM       View Profile for Alnilam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alnilam

i really liked this...it flows beautifully and lets the words express themselves. great write. i totally relate too...

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


4 posted 08-14-2003 02:27 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Alnilam, im glad you enjoyed it. Thankx

Tequilia




"I went to the woods to live deliberatly, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if i could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when

Sunshine
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5 posted 08-30-2003 06:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Boy do I understand this!
magic_612
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since 07-31-2003
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6 posted 08-30-2003 11:41 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

really good work, hope to read more of your poetry soon
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


7 posted 07-05-2004 02:36 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
Savage Quiescence
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8 posted 07-09-2004 10:17 PM       View Profile for Savage Quiescence   Email Savage Quiescence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Savage Quiescence

*Thumbs up*

A unique write, different structure and beautiful flow. You should be proud of this one. Thanks for sharing.

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