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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You were one of the Beautiful ones. One I truly adored. I cherished every word, You spoke. But now you’re gone. Gone… I started wondering, Why things were strange. Then I realized that, Things had changed. You were the one that I watched at night. I watched you fall asleep, And wonder what you were dreaming. Now all I see is An empty bed, Where you once laid. Alone… And then... I started wondering, Why things were strange. Finally I realized, Your feelings had changed… I miss you so much… But I wish I didn’t so much more… "Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~ [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-12-2003 11:29 AM).] |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
By your writing I can tell you miss him, your poems are very emotional and well written, nice read/write ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
I could not handel this poem, hit me really hard, ive been in this type of relationship and if your not the one who's feelings change MY GOD it hurts, not just your feelings but your pride too. almost have a tear in my eye, brang back alot of memeories. my heart hurts thinking about it. Good write Tequilia |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
An interesting read Spine Grinder, thanks for sharing it with us  Andy |
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