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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i hate this feeling knowing were drifting knowing were two different people i hate it your my best friend i've told you my thoughts we would talk about crushes tv shows and stupid school tests we've drifted we used to like the same things i used to be the loud self consious one and you the shy but amazing one we've changed and while that was happening we fell further and further away we never talk and when we do its for a min or two i miss you and everything we did together i guess its just natural for people to drift but that still doesnt make it right.. "when everything feels like the movies, |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I know exactly how this feels, I wish I could give you a hug because it sucks (for lack of a better word)Oh and about your poem it is truthfull and has emmotiion, I like how it tells the story of your friendship and I can really relate to it. So in other words I liked it  oh and I think its cool that you live in Alberta!-ash I wear my crown of thorns on my liar's chair full of broken thoughts I cannot repair [This message has been edited by Match (08-10-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
WOAH. This hit home so close it's scary. I'm actually going through something VERY similar to this right now...the only difference is, it's my fault. Either way...this poem was good. It was very simple...and I think that made it all the better. Nice job. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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