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BabieDoll
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0 posted 2003-08-08 10:50 PM


A single picture frame,
Containing two smiles.
Reflecting a time now as history...
The presence of our love.

Behind the mid-sized piece of glass
Lies all the good times of our past.
A certain little reminder
Of the better things in life.

Upon the wall it hangs;
Stinging my heart each time I glance.
With a sigh I gently take it off,
Placing it in my box of your memoirs,
Sealing away what used to be...*

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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1 posted 2003-08-09 08:50 AM


This is such a wonderful read, thank you for sharing this beautiful writing with us

Andy

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2 posted 2003-08-11 10:15 AM


this is so emotional, nice write/read

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

SilentTears
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3 posted 2003-08-11 11:04 PM


I've read this quite a few times before...I like it. It's very sad, but very good. I like poems like this...Very beautiful. Beautifully worded as well. Very nice job. Love's.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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