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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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Look how my world works without you Don’t it disgust you how it just all fits This isn’t an opportunity to call it quits I just don’t need you anymore Feel free to run Maybe it’s the sound of it Maybe it’s just your eyes But this isn’t something That’s gonna get better No matter how hard you try You think you know me There’s a chance you don’t Nobody really knows me Either they can’t or they won’t If I suffer in silence It won’t go away But if I speak out Your sympathy will barely last the day Look how my world works without you Don’t it disgust you how it just all fits With this mask to hide it all Bury my pride Not hard there’s none at all Bury my soul You forgot to call I just wish the world wasn’t cold. I just want something,One thing,Can’t you let me have someone,Anyone,Just for me,And this is what I seem to be,To everybody,Your last resort |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Nice! I really liked the last stanze. Good work! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice read and write, I also really liked the last stanza ~*~Karen~*~ |
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SimpleDiscourse Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 79 |
fantastic work with this one.  |
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