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Stoic
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0 posted 2003-08-08 10:14 AM


Like most of my works you probably won't know what to make of this..i try to be creative lol..anyway here it is

THE GAME IS ON

Lately i've been trying to steeler (steal her) hardaway(heart away)

But now it's game time! But at the same time-she's longing for attention

Did i mention-we've only been dating for a few years now-i no longer resemble my first impression

She could packer (pack her) superbowl-and i'd still wouldn't notice her affection

But when i tell her i love her-I mean it sincerely

I'd like to show her some love BUT MAN THIS IS GAME 7 OF THE WORLD SERIES!!

You feel me?

I may have spit game at her back in the day

Didn't want to play her wrong

By the way girl could you pass me the remote

The game is on

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forever.yours
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1 posted 2003-08-08 11:00 AM


hey thanks for the reply
well im not very good at critique (and i dont think im good at speeeling either lol)..the first time i read it i didnt get it but then i read it again and i decided i liked it!
well thats all! bye


Stoic
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2 posted 2003-08-08 02:00 PM


thank you much appreciated
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